Date: 05/31/2010 11:15 am Title: Chapter Two
Tut tut. What girl talk! Anyway, with Yates' judgement in on Jacobs one wonders whether she is right and if Jacobs will be up to the actual task. So far, she has indeed been personable. Will that continue if the pressure builds up to get the ship going?
So far everyone is gettign along well. No personal conflicts or woefully bad first impressions. Nice to see a crew getting along but I wonder how long this might last. Though if professional they really ought to be able to make it work. Looking forward to some developments of the crew interpersonnel relationships and how they gel together in the coming days and weeks.
Date: 03/25/2010 12:43 pm Title: Chapter One
Hope more is coming-this is interesting so far
Date: 03/25/2010 12:35 pm Title: Prologue
Cool so far-kinda what you'd expect, given the synopsis.
Date: 03/22/2010 03:10 pm Title: Chapter One
Oh great introductions to the crew. The Miranda has anew smell to it and it comes across in the details and in the cpatain taking up command. With the civilian clothes and relaxed comportment coming aboard, I've a feeling Romanov is going to be a little bit of a character. He also seems to have impressed his superiors big time in Border Patrol.
The two officers we are introduced to asides the captain also strike as warm and open and easily likeable. Loved the XO to newly minted XO chat. Hee hee. Likewise the Chief Engineer, Yates, the conversations between her and the captain are good - especially the one request bit.
Again, nice details that are not laboured painting the scene and routine of life. I also like the war drums tension that is building up. Very good.
Date: 03/22/2010 12:21 pm Title: Prologue
Oh what a brilliantly intriguing premise you have here. One I was sold on the Border Patrol vessel. Two, I was sold on the Miranda class hero starship. Three, the altered timeline that resulted seemed too good an opportunity not to be followed up again. Finally, I've found a story that explores it and with you at the helm Mike it will be a first class tale and will be superbly written. The start is already a strong indication of this with the immediate feel given of being onboard a Romulan vessel and the wariness of raising one's head lest it draws attention. Can't wait to see where this goes.