Date: 10 Sep 2011 06:24 Title: Chapter 1
It was disturbing, all right. A dark, dark tale of a woman with a really twisted, evil mind. She is completely detached from her feelings, all she has is her perverted mind. Looking into the mind of such a character and listening to her thoughts had to be terrible, but you managed to convey her mental state clearly--she is dangerous; no conscience, no feelings, nothing could stop her from achieving her goals.
Thanks! That one and ' The Plague' actually drained me. I hinted at a lot of this in 'Paradise Lost', but here we saw it unvarnished. I actually think this piece was darker than 'Dear Herbert', and that featured Redjac.