Date: 21 Sep 2009 20:16 Title: Chapter 1
You did a great job on the characters and set up a really cool scenario. That's one on Julian, eh?!?
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yep, O'Brien and Garak pulled one over on him. Now he needs to get revenge. Somehow. Some way. As soon as I can figure out how to pretend to be more intelligent than I am and fool somebody even more intelligent than Julian, he'll have his Garak revenge. O'Brien should be a little easier.
Date: 21 Sep 2009 12:21 Title: Chapter 1
Ha! Poor Julian.
This was a fun story to read, especially due to your talented handling of the DS9 character voices. Pitch perfect, every single one. I know you said it was hard to write, but I think you did a good job. And I'm firmly with O'Brien -- it's "moor" fun in the holodeck when you don't know what's going to happen.
Author's Response: I really appreciate the review, and I'm glad it succeeded. It definitely wasn't intended to be a "heavy mystery". I can't imagine doing a heavy mystery in under 5,000 words, but I couldn't have imagined doing one at all before this one. Maybe somebody else on the board has the mystery chops for that!
I agree with O'Brien, too. It would be much "moor" fun not to know what's going to happen next than just to act out a book or a play.