Date: 30 May 2013 16:40 Title: Chapter 4
More nods to canon, from the previous running battle that suggested using the Bussard collectors ala Insurretion we have a scene here that calls to mind Archer and Janeway. Hardly Starfleet values in display but I doubt Limis worries about that. Her choice to interrogate in such fashion does seem a little rushed but in character we can suggest she is running a clock in her own head and it used to just making things happen instead of being confined by strictures.
But a very interesting plot point about the ketrecel white plant and the figuring it out from the stolen equipment. So now we know the important information that needs to get to Starfleet and be acted upon. Will they and captain Limis listen?
And intriguing to use a Dyson Sphere. Somehow this is a find worthy of protection and it galling in peace time it can hardly afford a top priority for Starfleet. But then so close to Romulan space maybe it should be. As it seems the Cardassians too have an interest in what is going on here.