Date: 10 Aug 2009 14:22 Title: Part Two, Chapter Five
That was interesting-Kirk fighting Spock. Only, how long before anyone realizes that he's some kind of alien?
Author's Response: Hopefully not too long! But remember that these people, despite their dreams of space, really have no idea if there is life out there. There are far more deformities than aliens on Earth right now.
Date: 29 Jul 2009 16:33 Title: Part Two, Chapter Four
LOL! I dunno if at 5'8", Scott could ever be considered a big man (most of the crew was taller), even if he does have a powerful set of shoulders (not counting the movie era obviously); still, I really liked your introduction of Jim to the rest, and how you're tying in episode elements from City, as well as all new stuff. Good work!
Author's Response: Yeah, I wasn't thinking of height so much as muscle and width. Let's face it, even in TV-era, the uniform is a lot tighter on Scotty than on, say, Spock. That said, I'm sure everything I get wrong about Scotty could fill a book. Thank you very much.
Date: 28 Jul 2009 01:54 Title: Part Two, Chapter Three
Heartbreaking, the part about Spock. And now Jim and Gary are here, and I'm trying to figure out if the set is complete. ;-) ::hoping for an update soon::
Author's Response: They're all here except Chekov, actually. And thank you very much! (:
Date: 28 Jul 2009 01:40 Title: Part Two, Chapter One
In some ways, it's very reminiscent of Fahrenheit 451. Same kind of ban-everything-that-disturbs-things schism. Interesting take on religions and nationalities creeps in there, too. Intriguing work. Really.
Author's Response: Really? I've never read Fahrenheit 451, but I've heard of it, so I'll take that as a compliment. And I'm afraid my religious views end up creeping into everything I write, whether or not they have anything to do with the story... anyway, thank you very much!
Date: 07 Jul 2009 13:59 Title: Part Two, Chapter One
Rand's going to be trouble. I like the gift-what a great idea-Tolkein banned? I'd like to see the Enforcers try to get rid of every copy-fat chance.This is a very evil society you have created. I really want to know the underlying causes.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! And I have something very special in mind for Rand...
Date: 07 Jul 2009 13:49 Title: Part One, Chapter Two
Weird and chilling at the same time. I like Pike-I'm picturing Bruce Greenwood here. This is an awful AU you've created-that is, the setting is horrible, not your story. The story is great. What insanity could change America so completely is beyond me.
Date: 06 Jul 2009 23:04 Title: Part Two, Chapter One
Awww... look at that building crew! Liked the Number One and Spock interaction, and the continued dystopian feel.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I like writing Number One and Spock almost as much as I like writing Chapel and Spock... and dystopian, that was the word I was looking for. Again, thank you.