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Reviewer: Gumnut Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2009 03:45 Title: The Next Stage

You blew up Sydney! ::grin:: And to think that the fancy hotel I stayed at on the shores of Botany Bay is now gone...well they deserve it for the prices they charged us :D

Interesting perspective on Khan's escape from Earth. I've often wondered how he managed to launch that ship without anyone noticing.

Nicely written and nicely thought out. Thanks for writing and sharing.

(South Aussie)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked the story.

Reviewer: Lil black dog Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2009 00:23 Title: The Next Stage

Excellent job!  Nice exploration into how Khan and his followers managed to get off Earth.  If they were such hated and hunted men, I always wondered how this was possible.

Thanks for providing a fitting scenario.  Great work.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked the story.

Reviewer: Miranda Fave Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2009 21:55 Title: The Next Stage

Wow wee. That was great. Simple but very effective. Great exploration as to the 'fate' of Khan. I've not read the Eugenics War novels or anything but it seems like such a fascinating era, especially one of such import to the future of the Federation. Love the nod to how man in the future might forget the lessons of the past and then the added line that even superhumans need to grow old too. Well Khan showed them didn;t he on noth counts. Nicely done.

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad I was able to convey some of the horror those who lived through Khan's reign must have felt, and not being so quick to forget.

Reviewer: Gibraltar Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2009 19:04 Title: The Next Stage

An interesting take on Khan's tale.  I wonder, was the crater created by the launch of the Botany Bay, or did someone from the future decide to enact a little pre-emptive justice?

The mind spins just thinking about it...

Well written, as always.


Author's Response: Thanks! I like your further take on the nature of the crater. One never knows..

Reviewer: Mistral Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2009 18:36 Title: The Next Stage

Really neat. I never considered before the post-Khan era. You should post this at TrekBBS in the fan fic monthly challenge-it fits this month's challenge perfectly!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

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