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Reviewer: TemplarSora Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2013 09:05 Title: Chapter 1

Fun little random read. I liked the letters format of it, though the dates were kinda throwing me for a loop. Poor girl though...her little brother is bad. And I think it worked fine for you to go off the experiences you had in high school...she definitely came across like a teen girl. And it was kinda neat to see that, no matter the species, some things are universal:

"She calls it IDIC. When she said that in class we all laughed (except some of the boys-they are so stupid sometimes!)..."

Nice. lol

Author's Response: Well, thank you! I did sort of steal from Podkayne of Mars, too...

Reviewer: Lil black dog Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2009 03:05 Title: Chapter 1

As the mother of two teenaged girls, who hang out with their teenaged girl friends, all I can say is...boy did that ring true ;-)

Nice twist at the end - I am learning to expect that from you. ;-)  I so didn't see that coming.

Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks. As a male with no girls, I am glad it rang true-I have no experience(directly) with teen girls outside of my highschool memories. :)

Reviewer: Gibraltar Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2009 15:50 Title: Chapter 1

Oh.  Mah.  God!  That was just so... you know... totally awesome! 

Seriously, though, great story.  Damn little brothers! ;-)

Reviewer: Verenna Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2009 03:12 Title: Chapter 1

It seems future girls are still the same.....
Cattle?! A rude Captain. Really.

Author's Response: As a ship's Cpt.-they are all cattle to be transported.

Reviewer: RobertScorpio Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2009 22:34 Title: Chapter 1

I was reading this and then it came to me; I have read it before. Not sure where, or when, but the story is still very fun to read. In fact, did it continue? I hope so.

I like your 'unique' stories, Mistral. I too like to take the STAR TREK concept and try new things, so, I am totally with you on this one word...


Rob Scorpio

Reviewer: SLWatson Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2009 03:37 Title: Chapter 1

Cute idea, but the title makes me headdesk. It's not bad, though.

Author's Response: Headdesk? Um, pardon, what?

Reviewer: Terilynn Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2009 03:20 Title: Chapter 1


Author's Response: *snickers* the perfect reaction.

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