Date: 13 Sep 2012 01:11 Title: Chapter 1
This is so powerful and bleak...and yet, I firmly believe that Spock would not abandon even a revenant of Jim if there was any way he could come for him. I love how confident Jim is in that knowledge...even if he's not quite Jim.
Author's Response: Thanks. I am very proud of this one. Glad it rings true.
Date: 29 Apr 2009 11:53 Title: Chapter 1
This is quite an interesting story...I like it. Is this just a one part episode or is more coming???
Rob
Date: 14 Apr 2009 17:37 Title: Chapter 1
This was wonderfully terrifying, and you've retained just enough of Kirk to make it all the scarier. The ending in particular is just spectacular - bleak and hopeful all at the same time. Nicely done!
Author's Response: Thank you-one of my prouder(darker) moments, writing this. Glad you liked it.
Date: 06 Feb 2009 12:23 Title: Chapter 1
Oh yes. This is incredibly creepy. A good look at what a monster Kirk could have been without ethics... and yet you also feel sorry for the dead man and hope he finds peace somehow.
Date: 04 Feb 2009 03:36 Title: Chapter 1
One should never cross path with a dead man. Especially if this man is Jim Kirk.
Powerful story. Powerful imagery.
Thank you for sharing.
Date: 01 Feb 2009 17:44 Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this was interesting. Reminiscent of Shirley Maiewski's brilliant piece 'Mind Sifter', but much darker. Maybe the part left behind was his 'wolf' from 'Enemy Within'? A chilling story to say the least...
Author's Response: Inspired by 'Mind Sifter' which I have read a dozen times.
Date: 30 Jan 2009 14:13 Title: Chapter 1
Scarily dark - this Kirk makes the Mirror Universe Kirk look like a librarian he's so chilling.
Date: 29 Jan 2009 18:59 Title: Chapter 1
Whoa.
Tightly written, and so in-character... which makes it all the more tragic. You've very effectively scared me to bits. Well done.
Date: 28 Jan 2009 20:54 Title: Chapter 1
That was cool. Jim Kirk's essense without his conscious...no moral compass.
Great stuff.