Date: 06 Oct 2016 10:02 Title: Chapter 1
I love my TnT, and you did a nice job with them. I have this feeling T'Pol's more aware of what she's doing to him than she's willing to admit, and that considerably less will happen down there than she might let him believe...
And Trip really ought to stop pretending this stuff doesn't bother him and tell her EXACTLY how humans handle these things...
But, if he did, it would be too easy...
Date: 08 Apr 2009 16:06 Title: Chapter 1
I think you did a terrific job of conveying these ENT characters. I think you nailed very well the tempestuous relationship between T'Pol and Tucker. I imagine there would always be word games and glorious banter as exchanged here between them.
As Gumnet remarks, I could hear the two of them, as if onscreen. My only little nit pick is that I would imagine T'Pol doesn't really use contractions. A bit like Data. Just my own assessment or opinion about of Vulcans really. But a funny situation with great dialogue.
You should dabble in this universe again, me thinks.
Author's Response: Well, that's kinda debatable, isn't it? People tend to write all Vulcans speaking like Data, but onscreen all of them use contractions all the time. Spock, Saavik, T'Pol, Soval -- pretty much everyone. They do tend to use more academic vocabulary, though. So, it's tricky. Thanks for the comments, I'm glad you liked it. ;-)
Date: 06 Apr 2009 20:54 Title: Chapter 1
An intergallactic bordello? uuuuhhhh, more research is needed...she will have to be a martyr to science. How bad.
I had a good laugh with it. Thanks.
Author's Response: I don't think she's a martyr of science exactly... but I'm glad you found it funny. ;-)
Date: 06 Apr 2009 16:31 Title: Chapter 1
Ah, poor Trip! LOL! I've always liked him, even though I'm not huge into Enterprise as a whole. But this is funny, and sweet, and there were a few times I was laughing during it. The characters were excellently in character, too; good stuff!
Author's Response: I like him, too.;-)
Date: 06 Apr 2009 12:48 Title: Chapter 1
I have to say that you have the character voices down perfectly. I can hear them in my head...and it has been quite some time since I watched Enterprise.
Also, an interesting discussion between the two of them, showing sides that both may not normally be willing to display. And you played it well with both of them to get them saying what you wanted them to say.
Thanks very much for writing and sharing.
(currently devouring 'Absolute Horizon')
Author's Response: Oh. Thanks. I kinda heard them too in my head as I was writing, so that helped a bit. Still it was unnerving to write for another series for some reason. Glad it read okay.:)