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Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2021 10:55 Title: Part 1 - The Hard Hello: 10

You really accomplished a lot in this chapter - lots of character development, a little action, some humor, a bit of philosophy, strategy - and nothing that cheapened any of the characters (in ways the WB would have done in an instant.)

I particularly liked the atmospherics - really gave a sense of place.

A very satisfying, cinematic and well rounded scene.

Thanks!! rbs

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you enjoyed that chapter. It's fun to write scenes where you can really see characters play off each other and really highlight their strengths and attitudes.

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