Date: 13 Dec 2021 10:55 Title: Part 1 - The Hard Hello: 10
You really accomplished a lot in this chapter - lots of character development, a little action, some humor, a bit of philosophy, strategy - and nothing that cheapened any of the characters (in ways the WB would have done in an instant.)
I particularly liked the atmospherics - really gave a sense of place.
A very satisfying, cinematic and well rounded scene.
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you enjoyed that chapter. It's fun to write scenes where you can really see characters play off each other and really highlight their strengths and attitudes.