Date: 18 May 2020 02:03 Title: Epilogue
Nice tightly written story and a well spun mystery. So much better than shoot-em-up and moustache-twirling villains.
I also appreciated the bold headings to oirint me which ship we were looking into during the scene with the Esau.
Date: 18 May 2020 01:07 Title: Chapter 1
Nice job with the captain's reconciliation with Ensign Garrett - that's a story beat I've not seen before.
I'm pleased you enjoyed the story and the character interplay. Thank you for the feedback.