Reviews For Breathless
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Reviewer: Miranda Fave Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2009 07:54 Title: Chapter 1

What a magical little moment. No wonder the Enterprise is so a part of him and he a part of it. Something powerful and iconic about naming 'lettering' a ship like baptising. And of course the magic and wonder of the moment is so wonderfully evoked by your tone and use of language. Simply wonderful.



Author's Response: Thank you much, Miranda! I couldn't buy that he would have any large parts in it all, given his youth, but I could buy him doing this. ;-)

Reviewer: Gumnut Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2009 06:05 Title: Chapter 1

And just to think, out there some where is the rest of the team that will make that starship legend.

A great idea for the job Ensign Scott could be assigned to :D And nicely written, too. I love the image of the ship in Earth shine (and that phrase).

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Nutty
(stoned on music)

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment! It is, indeed, the sensible alternative to him building the Enterprise when he's that young, which makes no sense.

Reviewer: Mistral Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2009 11:38 Title: Chapter 1

This one blew me away when I first read it. The sense of wonder is conveyed in a manner that makes the reader feel it, themselves. A minor masterpiece.

Author's Response: Thank you! It's short, but some things can't ever quite be put to words.

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