Date: 26 Mar 2020 03:04 Title: The 5th day of T'lakht in the year 14,805
One of the best fan fictions I have ever read. Thank you for a superb in-depth view of one of our favorite alien cultures.
Nice visuals, strong character expository and development - and good writing that packs an emotional punch.
I'm also a fan of the bite-size scenes. It's always nice to see a writer who appreciates the value of keeping story to no more than 2-3 screens (1 as often as possible) before a click to the next installment. I can't say that enough - whenever I click on a story and see that it scrolls down 20 pages on a single click, it's a big disincentive to keep reading.