Date: 03 May 2021 12:05 Title: Part 2 - Shattered: 40
Nice creepy feeling there... I'm suspecting that wasn't Alt-Owens she saw... Perhaps Dark Star? Or something worse?
Charm is definitely an appropriate name for a tellerite - they're such fun characters to write.
Nice short focused scene. Hard to beat a pile of bodies...
Author's Response: I may have taken a cue from your writing style here. Originally, this was one very long chapter before I decided to break it up. I like what it does for the tension, although it's probably not helping the overall pace of this already very long story.