Date: 22 Mar 2021 11:52 Title: Part 2 - Shattered: 35
A kaleidoscopic travelogue of potential worlds, each deserving of a full scifi treatment. Kind of like speed-reading a pile of Robert Silverberg novels.
It does leave me wondering what happened to Gary Seven - and what the sinesthetic burst at the end was about. I rarely see such writing, so it's nice to see a big Jackson Pollock splash of sensory perception splattered onto the page. Definitely some of your more evocative writing.
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words, I definitely was going for a jarring and maybe even slightly psychedelic experience here.