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Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2020 01:18 Title: Part 2 - Shattered: 6

And why do I have a feeling that the Lifs being together isn't going to end well...

Definitely keeping the mystery going and a good setup for some very interesting scenes to come. 

I like Lif's concern about a jinx. I also like the other Lif's quick and accurate assessment of the situation. He is a nicely ambiguous character and nicely intelligent. Much better than an antagonist.

Thanks!! rbs

Author's Response: Thanks for that. Yeah, bad omens abound here, for sure.

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