Date: 09 Aug 2020 01:18 Title: Part 2 - Shattered: 6
And why do I have a feeling that the Lifs being together isn't going to end well...
Definitely keeping the mystery going and a good setup for some very interesting scenes to come.
I like Lif's concern about a jinx. I also like the other Lif's quick and accurate assessment of the situation. He is a nicely ambiguous character and nicely intelligent. Much better than an antagonist.
Author's Response: Thanks for that. Yeah, bad omens abound here, for sure.