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Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2020 13:40 Title: Part 1 - Splintered: 33

Nice tightly focused scene that was able to explain a lot of the story line through dialogue (always more interesting for back story and personal reactions than narrative). I like - and any reader should identify with Owens giving visual cues to a voice on a speaker.

Good continued character development on two different Amayas.. A neat trick considering only one of them was present.

Thanks!! rbs

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. This is the proverbial quiet before the storm.

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