Date: 28 Jun 2020 13:35 Title: Part 1 - Splintered: 12
Good Captain's dialogue from Michael - even though he has a bit of a challenge keeping his cool. I appreciated that his ire was primarily reserved for his officer and not the cantankerous Edison. I also appreciated the analysis about their alternates not being the same, but not entirely different.
Author's Response: Owens is a bit of a diplomat and a peacemaker in a similar vein as Picard. He knows he must control his people first before addressing external factors, such as Edison. Glad you are enjoying the subtle differences between characters. These will become much more pronounced as we delve deeper into the story.