Date: 25 Jun 2020 23:46 Title: Part 1 - Splintered: 7
A bad cough is always a bad sign in the Trek universe... Jon Owens is on the clock.
I recall coming through this part of the story the first time, this was about where I started to feel oriented into the story.
Good chapter length and focus.
Author's Response: Yeah, not just in Trek. A cough is the universal sign in fiction that somebody's in trouble. It's an obvious cliche, I know, but hopefully there are enough unexpected twists in this story to make up for it.