Date: 24 Jun 2020 16:45 Title: Prologue - Catch Me If You Can
A few spellchecker chews I noticed:
The paragraph beginning "She stared at the missing.." I think you meant "disbelief."
The paragraph beginning "He had a few steps..." I think you meant "bead" instead of "beat."
The paragraph beginning "Susan reached into her ear.." I think you meant "dug" instead of "plugged" or maybe "unplugged."
Feel free to delete this review. Thanks! rbs
Date: 24 Jun 2020 16:41 Title: Prologue - Catch Me If You Can
This is a great James Bond jump start. Several clever turns of phrase I appreciated - pretty much all of the descriptions of Klingon Opera, and Susan being squashed through a wringer.
Great visuals throughout - very cinematic - particularly the hoverbike chase.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. Yeah, I wanted to start this one off with a bit of a bang. The main inspiration for the opening chase is the beginning of Indiana Jones and the Temple of Doom.
Date: 10 May 2020 04:16 Title: Prologue - Catch Me If You Can
I see that you managed to tag this story "Expanded Universe"
Star Trek Hunter is also Expanded Universe, but I can't get that option to show up. Did you do something special to get it to pop up and become available?
Author's Response: Nope. Never had a problem with it. I just click Expanded Universe and then select the add option ">". If you're still struggling with that, try to contact support. There's a link to it in the forum, I think.