Date: 18 Dec 2017 16:59 Title: Prologue: Anything Goes - 1
Interesting chapter I thought, very interesting. Certainly it's a different beginning than most Trek stories. It kind of reminded me of the opening of Indiana Jones and the Temple of Doom with a bit of Moulin Rouge and De-Lovely mixed in. Add to that it was a great way to reveal Deen's talent. Very well written, consider me hooked. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the opening here and that it has captured your interest. Can't ask much more from the beginning of a story. Like those analogies, and yeah, I definitely wanted to try something a bit different here to start things off. Much more coming soon.