Date: 17 May 2015 14:44 Title: Try Matching Wits with Spock
Oops. I'd check your word count just to be sure E1981. It seems to run over by a bit. Otherwise, it has very much the feel and vibe of a TOS episode opener. One is waiting for the dramatic music cue as a flower turns with a face upon it or something.
Thanks. Fixed it.