Date: 23 May 2015 12:33 Title: They Do
Phew! I still thought maybe you were going to have the Borg invade or a Kazon assassin ready to take a potshot at Icheb before this was through... :) Just kidding, great job, a touching, beautiful ceremony, worthy of the love story you've created.
Date: 21 May 2015 22:58 Title: They Do
Sorry pollen allergies or something...
Aww, so sweet. I love that we get the perspective now from Maren, which allows some thoughts of a more emotional nature and about the practiclities of the marriage vows and ceremony. All very fititng and all very perfect. Really well done job that makes it all a very real romance story. To think there's a galaxy out there somewhere with warring Borg! Huh, would've have thunk.
E.T.A. with jespah about what the groomsmen are wearing! LOL
Date: 21 May 2015 15:39 Title: They Do
But why are the groomsmen all wearing leiderhosen???
Because I only had 500 words to play with, and let's face it, no one cares what the guys are wearing. :)
The real answer is that all four Starfleet guys are in dress uniform while Seth is in a nice 24th century tux.
Date: 21 May 2015 15:12 Title: They Do
*wet eyes* Allergies, I swear. Really. *wipes them*
Maren's description of her dress and herself painted a beautiful picture, which probably doesn't do it real justice but it was well-done nonetheless. The whole thing felt real, from beginning to end, and the two really do deserve such happiness.
Fantastically rendered scene.