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Reviewer: Zilley Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2015 10:31 Title: They Do

Yay! I have to admit that I expected something to spoil the occasion (as usually happens with fictional weddings). *dances happily*

Reviewer: CaptainSarine Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2015 12:33 Title: They Do

Phew! I still thought maybe you were going to have the Borg invade or a Kazon assassin ready to take a potshot at Icheb before this was through... :) Just kidding, great job, a touching, beautiful ceremony, worthy of the love story you've created.

Reviewer: Miranda Fave Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2015 22:58 Title: They Do

Sorry pollen allergies or something...

Aww, so sweet. I love that we get the perspective now from Maren, which allows some thoughts of a more emotional nature and about the practiclities of the marriage vows and ceremony. All very fititng and all very perfect. Really well done job that makes it all a very real romance story. To think there's a galaxy out there somewhere with warring Borg! Huh, would've have thunk.

E.T.A. with jespah about what the groomsmen are wearing! LOL

Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2015 15:39 Title: They Do

Oh, yay!

But why are the groomsmen all wearing leiderhosen??? 


Author's Response:

Because I only had 500 words to play with, and let's face it, no one cares what the guys are wearing. :)

The real answer is that all four Starfleet guys are in dress uniform while Seth is in a nice 24th century tux. 

Reviewer: trekfan Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2015 15:12 Title: They Do

*wet eyes* Allergies, I swear. Really. *wipes them*

Maren's description of her dress and herself painted a beautiful picture, which probably doesn't do it real justice but it was well-done nonetheless. The whole thing felt real, from beginning to end, and the two really do deserve such happiness.

Fantastically rendered scene.

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