Date: 23 Jan 2015 16:19 Title: Breath of Life
When I started reading this, I thought it might be Spock, I realized "OMG! It's ENTERPRISE herself that's talking!" Awesome.
::winks, nods:: Yes, I was couting on that. ;-) Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 04 Jan 2015 20:59 Title: Breath of Life
As I read the end I was reminded of doing something similar for a weekly prompt ages ago and yet here...it's better. Your writing far outweighs mine and here you show as we all know, the Enterprise as something more than nuts and bolts.
(I being I would be tempted to throw in at the end, "No you Klingon bastard, no one's getting out of there...") :)
I do but applaud.
A fighting chance to live.
::embarrassed blush:: Gosh, didn't remember that you'd done a WFW along those lines. I didn't steal your idea, honest, but I do love that last line you would have added. Wish I'd thought of it. ;-)
Date: 04 Jan 2015 08:04 Title: Breath of Life
So nicely done LBD.
The Enterprise has a soul and it final thoughts are so spot on for that great lady.
Thanks, FB. For me, she is just as important as any other member of the crew, so her 'death' in SFS was very heart-wrenching to watch.
Date: 01 Jan 2015 08:31 Title: Breath of Life
And so dear Enterprise spirals planetward to her destruction as her comrades observe the scene with deep sorrow. But her death brings them a fighting chance for life.
Well written. She is indeed a member of their family.
::grins, nods:: You so 'got' this. :D