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Reviewer: CeJay Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2014 15:33 Title: Chapter 9

Nice twist here. A greater conspiracy is at work and Etam's death has always been a foregone conclusion. This certainly helps to soften the blow for Sonia who finds himself with a new purpose and new masters.

Jessica and the rest of the crew remain ignorant however so it'll be tougher for them. But if Drake is right, something tells me they won't be in the dark for long. Their enemy is going to make another move. Only a question of when. And then what? Will they be forced to make a deal with the devil themselves?

This was a tough story to read at times but the ending tied it in nicely into the bigger picture and giving us plenty more to expect from Rafale and crew. Let's hope it won't all be this devastating. Jessica will need some wins after this.

Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2014 14:59 Title: Chapter 9

Ah ha ha well there's an interesting twist. But he's desperate, so that makes perfect sense. Interested to see where you will be going with this. Well done!

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