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Reviewer: CeJay Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2014 12:42 Title: Chapter 7

Wow, this is super bad. If the damage is really going to be as total as it's been implied, the fallout for Rafale is going to be immense. You just killed a planet. Sonia, if he survives is through for sure and even Jessica will have to carry some of the blame as she picked him to lead the mission.

And then of course there are the emotional consequences. I probably wouldn't sleep well for at least a couple of years if I had been part of this debacle.

Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2014 17:54 Title: Chapter 7

Oh God, that took a helluva turn.

I have to tell you, I got to the last word and I realized I was holding my breath. Very, very affecting.

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