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Reviewer: CeJay Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2014 17:47 Title: Chapter 2

Interesting. Looks like the alien's warp flight may have been prompted by their observation of starships. And they are clearly desperate to make some sort of contact.

I really enjoyed the imagery of the Rafale suddenly appearing. It's a bird, not it's a plane. No it's ... Okay, I know, wrong franchise.

Jessica needs to work on keeping her emotions for her lover/friend in check while on duty. I'm sure Nizeri didn't mind too much, but it was still pretty awkward and could get downright inappropriate if somebody else had been in the room.

By the way, I'm really hoping Justine isn't the one who buys the farm in this story. That would be just awful.

Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2014 12:02 Title: Chapter 2

There is absolutely nothing more that they could have done. There are going to be sentient species that we don't even recognize as being alive. Even this is better than that.

As for Sonia, his previous behaviors are not helping him. I do hope Jess can look past that a bit, and try to be fair with him. Otherwise, his complaints about her are going to start to hold some water.

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