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Reviewer: M C Pehrson Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2014 16:01 Title: Chapter 1: Curiosity Begs the Question: in the beginning

Good for you, Will! No storks. Tell her as much of the truth as she can handle at her tender age.



Author's Response:

Thanks M C! I wanted Riker to be truthful to his daughter. No sugar-coating a story. Just facts. But in a way she could understand them without going into too much detail. Hope I did a good job getting my point across. 

Reviewer: Miranda Fave Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2014 12:33 Title: Chapter 1: Curiosity Begs the Question: in the beginning

The Riker manoeuvre I almost thought for a moment. How would Riker try to avoid this question. Nicely done and very sweet.



Author's Response:

Ha ha MF! Originally when I wrote the title I was actually going to write something along those lines, but my mind insisted on this cute fluff piece instead. I may go something darker for the rest of the challenge, depending on what the prompts are. 

Reviewer: FalseBill Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2014 16:31 Title: Chapter 1: Curiosity Begs the Question: in the beginning

Nicely done, yes a question no adult wants to answer.
Still Will Riker handles it well.

Well Done.

Author's Response:

I actually imagined telling my own children someday about this exact conversation. Though when I do have my own children, I don't know if it'll come out quite like the way Riker said it. Glad you liked this. May switch gears for the rest of the Prompt challenge, depending on what the next prompt is.

Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2014 14:15 Title: Chapter 1: Curiosity Begs the Question: in the beginning

This is harder than the Kobayashi Maru! Well done.



Author's Response:

Thanks jes. It was actually harder than I thought writing this. As I wrote it, I could literally feel Riker's embarrassment. I hope I did a good job at getting the point across. I may switch gears for the rest of the prompt challenge. 

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