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Reviewer: FalseBill Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 00:42 Title: Chapter 3

Jespah tell HD to behave, still I think Marisol might give McGregor a fun shock.

Author's Response:

Problem is, she's a psychopath. Things might get ... interesting (although as I told zeusfluff, I have no idea where I'm taking them. I am open to suggestions. The weirder, the better!).

Reviewer: zeusfluff Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2014 01:44 Title: Chapter 3

These are absolutely priceless jes! I've just read all three parts in one sitting. 


Thanks for sharing this.

Author's Response:

Oh, thank you! I wish I knew where I was going with this ....

Reviewer: Mistral Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2014 12:44 Title: Chapter 2

Well, that's perfectly cryptic.

Author's Response:

No, not the mimes!!!

I was writing this for donations, actually - so I currently have no idea what happens with the mimes. Hmmmm.....

Reviewer: RogueJawa Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2014 04:35 Title: Chapter 2


Author's Response:

I was thinking terror, serious terror. Mimes! Arghhhh!!!!!

PS Thank you for reading (and donating)!

Reviewer: FalseBill Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2014 01:23 Title: Chapter 2

Boris being a little over protective isn't he?

nice 2nd drabble.

Author's Response:

Ah, thank you. Well, Boris is having an affair with her. So things could get dicey.

Reviewer: kes7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 18:16 Title: Chapter 2

Mimes!  Aaaaaaaaaah!  It's a horror story!  (Clowns and mimes scare me.)

Author's Response:

The Chilo are RUTHLESS!

Reviewer: kes7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 20:42 Title: Chapter 1

Ha ha ha ... well played.  Great way to drum up donations!

Author's Response:

Ah, and I thank you!

Reviewer: Miranda Fave Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 00:52 Title: Chapter 1

Hee, hee. Pure laugh out loud moment that jespah. Total win. Loved it. Now, why would it be that McGregor needs to be seduced ... ??? Interesting...

Author's Response:

... and who's the volunteer???? 

Someone's gonna take one for the team. McGregor better hope it's not the quarter-ton part-Gorn.

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