Date: 25 May 2014 20:09 Title: Chapter 5: Unknown Energy Signature
I honestly thought Q was behind it. Nice twist to make the Cardassians responsible. Now, if the Federation can find some way to harness this technology, so they are better equipped to fight the Borg in the future. Seems a continuation of the tale is in order.
Date: 25 May 2014 19:56 Title: Chapter 1: Chaos Erupts
I can so relate to that - well, not the bit about having the Borg materialize in my hospital room right after I'd given birth, but the rest was spot-on. The addition of the Borg makes a truly once-in-a-lifetime moment morph into something horrific...
Date: 25 May 2014 14:32 Title: Chapter 5: Unknown Energy Signature
Wow...well, that's one way to end things, on a cliffhanger, lol. Be interested to see where this continues to go. At least it all wound up...well...somewhat ok in the end. Aside from the Cardies and a mole...
Date: 24 May 2014 15:05 Title: Chapter 5: Unknown Energy Signature
Interesting. The Cardassians? And it makes me wonder who the mole is--almost seems it would have to be someone who knew Riker, possibly a rogue Starfleet officer, who has an axe to grind with him. I hope you plan to expand this one, as I'd like to read more.
Author's Response: Of course Gatekeeper I'm already working on a 2nd story that will be part of a series that follows what happens next.
Date: 24 May 2014 13:50 Title: Chapter 5: Unknown Energy Signature
What a great ending but the Cardassians have made a mess of things indeed. It looks like everything may come out just fine. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks Mick. I'm currently working on the second story that will be a part of a series. I haven't got a title for the series yet though.
Date: 24 May 2014 07:49 Title: Chapter 5: Unknown Energy Signature
Chilling end here, shame that we didn't see more of Will's children considering they seemed to have been the focus at the beginning. I liked the little appearance of Q and the way this was left open for further development. Nice job all around!
Date: 24 May 2014 06:51 Title: Chapter 5: Unknown Energy Signature
When Q showed up I thought things had taken a left turn but then his reveal that it's the Cardassians behind it!! My goodness. A real surprising twist. Nicely played. Definitely worth expanding and exploring further. Well done on all these ficlets.
Date: 24 May 2014 00:59 Title: Chapter 5: Unknown Energy Signature
Well, leave it to the Cardassians to make a mess of things. This presents a HUGE advantage to them tactically and it look like Riker and co. will have a major problem on their hands. I'm glad everyone came out all right, but this has left me not hopeful about their future.
Date: 23 May 2014 19:25 Title: Chapter 4: Mysteries Uncovered
You sure do like to torture this poor family.
Author's Response: What can I say? I live for angst and drama. Makes for good storytelling. Wait till you see my big reveal for Day 7. Hopefully it will make much more sense.