Date: 15 Dec 2013 22:26 Title: Your People
Oh! The stranger in a strange land can certainly be a new adventure for Eriecho.
I love how your character weaves so well into her story, and brings those two threads of nuTrek together so beautifully. I'd feel comfortable with a new Abuela like Maria de la Reina, too.
I heard the characters' voices clearly - Eriecho, Shaw and of course Saddik. Good call on the MACO being confused when she offered to give him something for the alarm clock. She's so used to commerce and trading that any kindness or thoughtfulness seems initially suspect.
Thank you. I LOVE it.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it. I was a little worried, honestly, lol. And thank you for adding it to your series as well...I'm honored. I'm looking forward to seeing more Eriecho adventures later on!
Date: 15 Dec 2013 19:06 Title: Your People
Very nicely done.
You to my reading ear seem to capture Eriecho voice and get her line of thinking right at having to live on New Vulcan with yet more Vulcans. Still it was a nice touch and bring the USS Whiston doctor to speak to Eriecho was an interesting choice. That serve the story well.