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Reviewer: Lil black dog Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2013 03:30 Title: Chapter 2 - Stuck

Otra is stuck but finally able to sort out the pieces of what she is seeing.  But more importantly, can she communicate that information so the timeline can be fixed?

Lots of wacky, weird stuff going on here.  Something tells me it will get more bizarre before long.  And now that the Terran Empire is in control of both sides of the pond, what is their plan?  Can the powers that be there see a way for their Empire to endure by using other timelines?  Only one way to find out...

Author's Response:

It's been irresistible for me to have the Empire continue on, and have control of both sides, a lot of the time when the timeline is messed up. Our side will always have Fifth Columnists, their side will always have (hidden) decent people, and so if there can be a widened breach, I figure there's bound to be mixing.

Reviewer: FalseBill Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2013 18:31 Title: Chapter 2 - Stuck

So Otra stuck in vision deadlock and you good doctors arguing about what the best thing to do. Poor Kevin his computer can’t help him find the fault and worse fix time.

Bet that was a bit of a shock to realise that the Terra Empire now control both sides of the pond. A not as big as a shock to find your wife is now the emperor consort and doesn’t care about starving people.

As always you draft a beautiful piece and bring back old characters and given them a moment to shine while fact the fire. Top work as always.

Author's Response:

Aw, thank you!

Boris's wife ends up as the Empress Consort in a few other stories. Heh, she's a not so sympathetic character.

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