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Reviewer: FalseBill Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2013 00:16 Title: Chapter 11

That is a weird discovery by the Excalibur crew, I do wonder what the secret of the NX shuttlepod is and why was the girl in it to start with.

You keep adding to the mystery and keep building the questions for this story, here hoping McAfee starts to find her answers.

Still as always you got a good story telling balance going on with the landing party and the rescue shuttle.

Good to see that McAfee realise she need to set the rules down early to these under her command.

Nice to see the Captains Yeoman wants to prove his worth to McAfee will be interesting to see how she react to that discovery.

Reviewer: CeJay Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2013 22:08 Title: Chapter 11

A survivor in an outdated shuttle which has also somehow weathered this attack. I'm thinking there is something about outdated technology that might become the key to this negative energy mess. Question is, what exactly and how can it help McAfee and company?

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