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Reviewer: FalseBill Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2013 18:12 Title: Chapter 9

So can Espinoza realize in time not to engage and get back and rescue the landing party. Worrying that it’s only the shields that are stopping the anti-energy from draining the Excalibur.

Chang is right high heel go-go boats aren’t meant for running in.
I think she might be working on cracking the tough nut that is Mr. Forrester.

Well the McAfee and R’Shraan conflict has finally show it first sign of starting.
Still I think the captain has handle it well, and her self doubts about how this first mission is going are realistic and add to the character believability.

Good to see Mr Forster remaining the junior offices to worry about the cold before none-existent predators.
Yes how does one counter a phenomenon that shouldn’t exist?

Well done another excellent chapter.

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