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Reviewer: FalseBill Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2013 16:30 Title: Chapter 4

So Mr. Espinoza has a past with the Cairo and beaten up a Wife/Daughter beater prisoner, must of got good reports from his old CO, for McAfee to take the risk on him. Still it always good for the crew to have someone who follows his consensus and not just orders blindly.

That was an interesting idea on old ship being retro-upgrade to explain the seemingly random NCC numbers that the Constitution class seem to have.

But having to sacrifice the bowling alley for a rear torpedo launchers, that just so unfair on the crew ;)

This command crew is coming together and we beginning to see the interactions at this the first senior staff briefing.

Reviewer: CeJay Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2013 22:24 Title: Chapter 4

Okay, so I cheated a little bit. I've read all the chapters up to this one in one go but only leaving you a review on this chapter. In my defense I've read this story before. And yet, I had almost forgotten all the things that took place leading up to McAfee assuming command. I especially enjoy the way you have weaved this all into TOS canon, including a brilliant cameo by an excellently contrite Kirk himself.

Great stuff all around. I'm looking forward to rediscovering this story almost as much as seeing it continue where you had left off.

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