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Reviewer: FalseBill Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2013 16:09 Title: Chapter 3

Now Gracie has the hardest job of a Captain, she got to assemble a command crew from scratch. Well taking her personal aide as her Captain Yeoman is a logic and sensible move.

Nice descriptive work with Engineer Phillips on the workbee touring the carcass of the Excalibur. Good to see the Lexington repaired and ready to go out once more under Commodore Wesley, like adding that small dinner and McAfee doing a compare and contrast between the two men.

Then the imply hard work of trying to find a first officer, I must admit I did think that was one role Starfleet command would force a pick on her, perhaps that why Commander Raul Espinoza has just walked in.

Still this is a very enjoyable read.

Reviewer: MIck Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2013 02:56 Title: Chapter 3

Good banter between Collins and McAfee.  You've definately set up a mystery with Espinoza.  I'm curious where he came from?  It's definately enough to keep mre reading.  Good work!



Author's Response: Mick - thank you for your kind comments! More coming very soon.

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