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Reviewer: FalseBill Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2013 15:55 Title: Chapter 2

Now that is at though-full scene with Gracie answering the question from the cadet about not using the self-destruction to stop M-5. I think Gracie handle the situation well and gives an intelligent answer and give the credit something to think about in return.

Was an interesting scene waiting in the admiral front office and commander Fournier accidentally annoying Gracie was amusing.

Then the Admiral talking his own sweet time to explain to her why she is being offered the command of the Excalibur.

Using fung shui to justify the need was an odd choice but it does seem to work in context for the Admiral.

Reviewer: MIck Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2013 02:53 Title: Chapter 2

I loved Grace's last line at the end.  She was very professional, and yet enthusiastic at the same time.  I liked your explaination of the sexism in Starfleet during the TOS era, and it was nice to see Nogura start to change that from within.  

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