Date: 04 Oct 2013 13:41 Title: Chapter 3 - Under the Weather
A short chapter, but at least some time for Douglas to get his bearings, catch his breath, and get some much-needed medical help. But only a brief respite, as now he must figure out a way to deal with the threats and issues at hand.
Author's Response: Indeed a brief respite for Douglas but he does have a challenge ahead. Cheers for reading.
Date: 25 Sep 2013 12:42 Title: Chapter 3 - Under the Weather
heh...that was a nice chuckle at the end. Hooray for the Doctor's sarcasm.
This is really starting to feel like a dungeon-crawler kind of story with the way the TIC is a maze to Douglas. I keep waiting for a random Chilo to jump out and then some good fight music start up. It's got a nice feeling of suspense and unknown to it. Hope Doc can fix his hand though...
Author's Response: Yes the EMH sarcasm does work well as an ending. Glad you enjoyed the story so far.