Date: 28 Sep 2013 11:13 Title: Chapter 1 - Backpfeifengesicht
Off to a good, engaging start. Unfortunately I didn't have time to keep up with the RR, so I was wondering where the Chilo came from--whether they were your idea or canon characters. Good use of them, and a way to make them shine in their own right.
Author's Response: Well I'm glad the start engage you. As for the Chilo, their a creation of SLWalker for Ad Astra which she kindly let me shine another light on.
Date: 25 Sep 2013 12:16 Title: Chapter 1 - Backpfeifengesicht
grr...the Chilo. What a pain in the rear they've been for the RR, and how delightful it's been to have your crew taking them on in their own way on the side.
That is one helluva "secret" word, though. How do you even pronounce that word? lol What happened the first few times when his crew got tongue-tied trying to say it? lol
Author's Response: Indeed hence why I took SLWalker Chilo and gave them a side mission. Yes it is a bit of a secret word, still no danger of an accident use :) Cheers for reading & reviewing.
Date: 23 Sep 2013 09:01 Title: Chapter 1 - Backpfeifengesicht
I remember this WFW - and now - oh no - the Chilo!
They are a rather useful enemy, eh?
Loved the nod to the cabal and the Temporal Cold War. And of course the TIC. :)
Author's Response: Yes the Chilo are a useful enemy. Yes I thought you might like the TIC reference :)