Reviews For Daybreak
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Reviewer: Strider Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2012 02:40 Title: Chapter 1

I love the K&S&M interactions--very amusing! But I also really appreciated how, with all they've seen and done, these three can still find awe for the beauty of nature. I think you brought that out really well. I also like how Spock gave the other two that experience as a gift, but did it so quietly and subtly that it almost wasn't noticeable. Well done.

Reviewer: Gumnut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2009 19:08 Title: Chapter 1

Aw, I loved this. Beautifully written and the imagery was fantastic.

You certainly write a good Spock vs. McCoy :D You have McCoy at his best and most lovable.

Also, technically, your writing is really high calibre. Thanks so much for writing and sharing.

(up before the sun)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story - it's so much fun to write Spock vs. McCoy scenes. I just can't resist. :D

Reviewer: Miranda Fave Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2009 22:28 Title: Chapter 1

Oh that is excellent writing that captures the three characters so perfectly. Very well done. Though much kudos for the following line:
"My mother is quite fond of a peculiar practice involving the throwing of frozen projectiles."
That was a laugh out loud moment!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! The image of Amanda trying to get Spock engaged in a snowball fight is a funny one. ;)

Reviewer: Anna Amuse Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2009 00:25 Title: Chapter 1

I LOVED this! A beautiful moment, and so true for the characters, every word, every gesture.
Thank you!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story.

Reviewer: Lil black dog Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2009 02:03 Title: Chapter 1

Ohhh, that was classic banter of the Triumvirate at its very best! Thanks!!

Author's Response: Thank you! Nobody does banter like the Big Three. :D

Reviewer: SLWatson Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2009 02:56 Title: Chapter 1

A beautiful, quiet little moment in the hectic lives of the trio. Simple and sweet -- excellent work!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. :)

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