Date: 02 Jun 2013 05:26 Title: Chapter 1
See, I'm torn between my love for this story and my total despair that I'm not the one who's writing it. It's just brilliant and creative and cool. I love how you're mixing the voices of the nuCrew with the insanity of this situation and the little windows to the prime universe we know and love.
Seven. Means nothing.
Date: 01 Jun 2013 00:53 Title: Chapter 1
Ah.The numbers, the numbers!
Of course they are meaningful. I do believe Keenser is an avatar for someone else. Someone ... taller ... blonder ... female-er ... be-catsuited, too.
The loss of 2/3 of the earth is, I'm thinking, a red herring part of the illusion, that the Xindi ultimate weapon actually hit Earth and whacked us but good, and Earth was the planet to get it, and not Vulcan.
The code snaking along his eyes feels a lot like The Matrix.
Well-done, wacky and mysterious - I am beginning to expect such things from you, yanno.
Author's Response: I like a bit of mystery, but I certainly love your guesses ;) It's absolutely fascinating for me to see the connections you're making. Thank you so much for them.