Date: 26 May 2013 05:33 Title: Chapter 2
LOL! Oh sweet bliss. Imagine giving such a gift to your boss. And of course then admitting to the regift nature of it. Love the innocence of Data in all of this. Like I say for all the humour of the scene you actually get the kernal of the character. And who knew, you also do mean TNG takes as well. You are an author I'm going to be following for sure.
Date: 26 May 2013 05:30 Title: Chapter 1
Hee, hee, it is the last line that comes from nowhere about Worf regifting that cracks me up and has me imagining Worf doing the very same as Data pulling the lever and listening to This is a turkey. Gobble, gobble. That image has me falling over. You have a knack for conjuring the wild from simple lines as well as crazed visuals of coconut thongs. Splendidly delightful. And yet despite the comedy of it all there is a truth, a character truth in Data exploring becoming fascinated and perplexed by the toy as he tries to figure out what it means about humanity and his own to better understand humanity and to be more human himself.
Date: 23 May 2013 00:15 Title: Chapter 1
Somehow, I really do have no trouble seeing Data being fascinated by this object, if only for trying to figure out the sociological impact it had, and a bunch of other stuff no human would consider.
Plus, the story is cute, and sweet. And distinctly lacking in coconuts (alas!) Nicely done!
Author's Response: What's that? You want me to write Data in a coconut thong, you say? ;) This can be arranged...