Date: 31 May 2013 01:26 Title: Chapter 8
Hirogen and creatures which feast on triolic energy? This away team seems doomed!
Also, having reached the half-way point, this a very gripping story with a great plot concerning these creatures which feast on neuro energy plus including the Hirogen is a great additional!
On top of that you're making Jessica's road through captaincy a rocky one, and this sure is a mission to 'cut ones teeth into' while some of the senior staff and crew are not so happy about Jessica being captain so I sense a mutiny in the wind if the Rafale falls into serious dire straits.