Date: 31 May 2013 00:59 Title: Chapter 5
I love how you portray Jessica's imcompetence and lack of experience on both a personal level and an external level to. She is so green at her job and thank God Mal'kon, their former captain, did such a good job with the crew of the Rafale. I'm starting to think that Dossu is going to be the unofficial power behind the throne so to speak, he has all the experience which Jessica lacks and I get a sense of him holding her a hand. Just a little bit but it's there.
However at least luck is with Jessica for the time being. But boy does she have a lot to learn! It's kind of painful -- in a good cringing way -- to see Jessica stumble like this and rely on luck and a crew more experienced than her to get through situations.
Date: 07 Apr 2013 20:04 Title: Chapter 5
Interesting how for Jess things went from boring to clean-your-pants-out-with-a-stick in a nanosecond. The Hirogen have turned tail and ran, but what of the other alien(s)? Can't wait to see how (or if) this untried, fledgling crew will come together to deal with this turn of events.