Date: 01 Aug 2014 20:31 Title: Chapter 4
Wow. That was a fiery encounter in the mess. Things aboard the Rafale are very tense and acromonious. This does not bode well. The crew needs to work together. As Dossau says, they are all Starfleet officers and need to be able to step up to the plate. However, there's lots of pain aboard and the Merv replacements make it hard for the Rafale old guard and vice versa. Perhaps they'd best focus on the fact they survived and honour those that died by being the best they can be. But that's an inspiring speech that's going to have to come at some point otherwise hard lessons are going to teach them that. But given that they can blame the others and feel grief and loss it is no wonder this is going to be a hard task to bring the crew together.
Yet the challenges ahead as they arrive at the Bassen Rift are clear. Not so apparent to our heroes are the other threats just waiting for them in there where they will have no one else for support but themselves. Ohh shivers. I love set ups like this. Fantastic.
Date: 30 May 2013 18:57 Title: Chapter 4
Dossu is absolutely right to pray here! Although I thought -- and perhaps I have not been paying attention -- that Wirstowx was the chief tactical officer and chief of security? Or have those two positions been differentiated?
In fact, it makes me wonder what Starfleet were thinking merging the two crews together... I guess the top brass in Starfleet still like to make stupid decisions!
Date: 26 Mar 2013 13:50 Title: Chapter 4
Gah, the tension on this ship runs deeper than I realized. Having crew openly defy the authority of the XO is a bad sign, but Obruz handled it deftly. Hopefully, this mission might serve to allow the disparate crews to gel together more effectively.