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Reviewer: FalseBill Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2013 06:10 Title: A Question

So Jessica reason for requesting to be assigned to the Rafale is explained and yes it does sound silly said aloud but it show how close Jessica is to Bridget and Justine that she can voice it aloud, and they response is to say they look to be assigned to Rafale next year.

Simply but good opening.

Reviewer: Mackenzie Calhoun Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 17:42 Title: A Question

A brilliantly written story Temp. The attention to detail and characterisation is the type I strive for but seem often to fail. Such a grim reality depicted here. Star Trek at it's finest.

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