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Reviewer: Miranda Fave Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2013 17:20 Title: Turn

You have to be commended for writing such a hard piece. Trying to write mourning and to express it in such a way to give depth to it and seem maudlin and everything else in between is really hard. Especially given that despite the 'stages of mourning' there isn't really a timeline, there isn't really a methodical approach as to how someone walks through their grief. However, I think your writing was bold and brave in tackling it and you didn't pull too short on telling the story and make for a quick premature exit.

Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2012 10:14 Title: Turn

Ah, a breakthrough - this is good.

Reviewer: Ln X Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2012 08:18 Title: Turn

Are Jessica, Justine and Bridget of the same age? If they are then this whole story will make a lot more sense to me.

Author's Response: heh, yes, they are. Jessica is maybe a year older, and Justine is definitely the younger one of the trio. They were best friends at Starfleet Academy and all recent graduates.

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