Date: 02 Sep 2012 21:42 Title: Act Three: Justice Served
Oh my gods, Section 31 has its own divisions?! Just how far out do they spread!?
Very good in planting the seeds for future conflict in the DMZ.
Author's Response: The thinking being that Section 31 is organized in cells much like the Obsidian Order, and possibly the Tal Shiar.
Date: 01 Sep 2012 11:25 Title: Final act: Joining the Maquis
Yep, right or wrong it shaped the course her future would take. Good work, very engaging story.
Date: 01 Sep 2012 11:20 Title: Act Three: Justice Served
How she got there didn't bother me at all - I just figured that came from the info on the data rod. What did bother me is what this act will ultimately cost Rebecca in personal/moral terms. It may feel good, and satisfying at this moment, when her grief is still fresh and raw, but how will she view it in say, ten years? Has this act irrevocably changed the person she was, and inadvertently molded the person she will become?
Not to mention, how will all this impact her friend Limis, for surely the powers that be will be able to piece things together and know it was she who provided Rebecca with this sensitive, classified information.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the exploration of the deeper philosophical issues. It is mostly exploration of who succumbs to revenge and who is willing to consider the long-term implications of ones actions, even throwing in Picard's rather grandiose claim about humanity in the 24th century.
Date: 01 Sep 2012 09:16 Title: Act Two: Tracking the Perpetrators
And despite the treaty, the plan is to do nothing - exactly the kind of thing that leads to frustration with the system and people taking matters into their own hands. Why do I feel like that's gonna happen here?
Date: 01 Sep 2012 09:03 Title: Act One: A Terrible Crime
And the scene is set, the seeds of revenge are planted. And thanks for including all the background information - certainly helpful for someone like me who is only peripherally familiar with DS9.
Date: 31 Aug 2012 18:56 Title: Final act: Joining the Maquis
Nicely written piece and good to see the Maquis hereabouts. Very nicely done.
Date: 29 Aug 2012 19:13 Title: Final act: Joining the Maquis
So that's how Rebecca got into the Maquis, good job explaining that and I'm also impressed you didn't make the killing of that gul a big thing. Some authors would exposited like crazy the moments before Rebecca fired that fatal shot. I prefer your method; it just happens and in some ways that is more powerful...
Author's Response: Along with more back and forth trash talk. Glad that someone appreciated that particular moment wasn't overplayed in favor of more focus on the main characters descent into darkness.
Date: 29 Aug 2012 18:48 Title: Act One: A Terrible Crime
So that's what got Rebecca into the Maquis, and what spawned her hatred of Cardassians. It's interesting that your focusing more on Rebecca because nearly always in your Lambda Paz stories she seemed more a background character.
Gonna be interesting seeing to what depths she'll descend to in this story...
Date: 29 Aug 2012 16:55 Title: Final act: Joining the Maquis
So, just like that, off Rebecca goes, throwing away whatever her life was before.
Author's Response: For one, she was in the 24th century version of a dead end job and family was one of the coping mechanisms in a stagnant life. Take that away, one's life is already ruined. Granted, that would beg the question of why 24th century humans in the Trek universe would turn to lives of crime (i.e. joining the Orion Syndicate), but it does seem to happen. Secondly, the Trek universe tends to favor portraying the hiding out in caves aspect of being in a dissident group. They still lead regular lives while engaging in more subversive activities on the side.
Date: 29 Aug 2012 16:53 Title: Act Three: Justice Served
I feel like things were skippe (e. g. how she got in there). Hmm.
Author's Response: That Section 31 was involved should've made that clear. And since the story is more about the process of how a person goes from trusting in the justice system to seeking revenge, so any drawn out fight scenes would have strayed from that.
Date: 29 Aug 2012 16:36 Title: Act Two: Tracking the Perpetrators
And the next piece of the puzzle snaps into place ....
Date: 29 Aug 2012 16:14 Title: Act One: A Terrible Crime
And so it is set up....