Date: 16 Jun 2013 14:30 Title: Chapter 9
St. Peter steps up to the plate. She did good. She had to. But I have a feeling that the reprecussions are only to be met down the line. Kudos to St. Peter and I like the natural sense of how the responsibility of taking the shots came down to her. She didn't seek it out, she didn't want to become a hero, she didn't shirk the responsibility - she just did what needed to be done in the moment.
Date: 06 Oct 2012 22:26 Title: Chapter 9
Hell yeah! Ironic that the USS Wolf 359 would save the day but awesome stuff. Jess stepped up and owned in a big moment, while saving her friends and hundreds of people she doesn't know.
I wonder how this lowly science officer is going to be treated now that she's accumulated so much street (or space) cred? Should be fun.
Date: 23 Jun 2012 04:12 Title: Chapter 9
That was an intense battle! Your descriptions of the action captured the drama without overwhelming the narrative, not something easily done.
Kudos to Jessica for stepping up in the face of Elaina’s indecision. Rafale nearly sacrificed itself in saving the crew and patients aboard Merveille, a testament to Jessica’s love for her friends. Fortunately, the ultimate sacrifice though offered was not accepted, and Jess lives to see another day.
I’ll be interested to see how she copes with the aftermath of this terrible battle.