Date: 16 Jun 2013 10:13 Title: Chapter 6
Oh nos. The start shows something massive and really bad is happening and still our guys are not in the loop and their fate awaits still unknown. Man you are teasing us like hell waiting for the climax.
In the meantime, we get some terrific character stuff. Liking the build up of history for Jessica and her friends and the complex nature of the friendship. It can't have been easy to see her two best friends hook up. Sure she had to feel like a third wheel. If that wasn't the reason for going to Rafale I wonder what was or what reason has she convinced herself of.
Date: 06 Oct 2012 22:06 Title: Chapter 6
So, there was a thing with Jessica and Bridget? That explains some of the reason why she's on the Rafale but not all of it ... what are these other reasons? Who is sending these ships after Starfleet vessels?
Questions, questions. I'm looking forward to the answers.
Date: 10 Jun 2012 17:15 Title: Chapter 6
The three women obviously have a complicated relationship, and some awkward backstory in places. Nonetheless, their friendships have withstood the vagaries of romantic dalliances, and now their careers have started upward trajectories.
I sincerely hope Bridget’s parting words were not a bad omen, given the recent happenings in that sector.
Date: 10 Jun 2012 17:00 Title: Chapter 6
Sounds like there is trouble in paradise. Or at the very least an omen for bad things to come. Things are simply too peaceful at the moment, leading me to believe something big is going to happen soon. Funny thing is, I'm enjoying this almost domestic vibe so much, I wouldn't even mind if nothing out of the ordinary would happen to Jessica and her friends for a while.
Also have been catching up wit Jessica's background story. Very nice and touching stuff.
Date: 10 Jun 2012 11:09 Title: Chapter 6
Ah, I was wondering when you would address this.
Three-part female relationships are often difficult, even when there is no sexual component (and you've amped that up with the history between Bridget and Jess). There is pretty often someone who's the odd gal out, and that's Jess. It's not just that Bridget and Justine are together in a couple, it's not just that she's on a different ship or of a different, unknown, species. There is also a very real third wheel/fifth wheel situation going on there, despite what everyone is saying. It's kind of an elephant in the room that they're all kind of avoiding, it seems.